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Oh Look, I Got A Free Crane by 9atrigg Oh Look, I Got A Free Crane by 9atrigg
IT'S DONE!!! 8D

I made 4 cranes. ...Turns out the first one was the better one, so I didn't have to do the others after all.

On the cereal box, it says:

Lucky Stars
Excellent Source of all vitamins!
Keep your days shining brightly!
Free Paper Crane Inside!

Yeah~ Took me all day. The star is their mascot whom does not have a name. xD

The milk carton is not mine, it is *kickass-peanut's.

This is for the project 1000 Deviants, 1000 Cranes. For more information, please go here: [link]

Hope you enjoy, I had a lot of fun doing this~!
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This is a cute idea :D There are a few points I'd like to bring up though:

- The paper you've made the crane out of is a bit hard to distinguish from the bowl of cereal stars. I think a solid color would have been a better choice.

- The wood grain background is a rather distracting to me ^^; The lines really don't flow with the composition at all. Look how crooked the spoon looks with all those lines behind it to see what I mean. But I think I see what you were going for though by putting the focal point of the composition at the point where all the lines converge. Maybe setting a tablecloth down, or a place-mat would help?

Hope this was helpful :) A few tweaks and you'll have a five star (haha) image :D
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Dragon-Clawshade Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Very cute. :meow:
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jinxchan6306 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
dream stars and a crane? nice!
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9atrigg Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Aw, muchas gracias! :D
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ExcelsiorRedNose Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it!
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Aw, thank you! ^^
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ExcelsiorRedNose Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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Swerd12 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That is awesome. After trying to make one star myself, I appreciate much more the hard work it must have took you, haha. Nice job, creative idea!!!!
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
Aww, thank you~! :D
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Swerd12 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!!! How long did it take you to make all of those???
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
About 30 sec. to a minute to make each one, though the painted ones too much longer because I had to paint and dry so...I'm not really sure. ^^; I'm just gonna assume about three weeks to a month with school and distractions included in. It took me two weeks to construct the whole picture, I remember telling everyone in the household not to touch anything on the table because I was waiting for the correct lighting...I wanted viewers to actually feel the morning sunshine, ya know? xD
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Swerd12 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I figured out how to make the stars!!! I'm gonna give them to my friend for her birthday!!! Thanks!!! :D
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:icon9atrigg:
9atrigg Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
You're welcome! (:
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devious-onigiri Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student Photographer
aw this is really cool! :3
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:icon9atrigg:
9atrigg Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011
Thank you! :D

And thanks for the fave~ :3
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devious-onigiri Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student Photographer
welcomes- and np :3
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livingdeadgirl2748 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
You are so friggin awesome hun! You got it we all no it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rawr
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:icon9atrigg:
9atrigg Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
love you too dear~ :3 Thank you for coming over to my house and typing this up, lol
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:iconlivingdeadgirl2748:
livingdeadgirl2748 Featured By Owner May 7, 2011
bu xie!!!!!!!!! love ya grl
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TheRealMorticon Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This is completely adorable. Well done.
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:icon9atrigg:
9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
Thanks! :D And thanks for the fave on this too! :3
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TheRealMorticon Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Sure thing! ^3^
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synconi Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011   Artisan Crafter
SUCH a lovely idea and beautifully done; so bright and colourful and scrumptious. :love:
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
haha thank you!! :D Wish I could eat some of them right now, lol~ :3

And thank you dearie, for the llama badge! :D
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synconi Featured By Owner May 5, 2011   Artisan Crafter
You're welcome! <3
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9atrigg Featured By Owner May 5, 2011
:hug: <3
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HalfEatenFry Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
NOMMiful!! :D
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
lol thanks~ :D

They're a great source for all your vitamins! 8D xD
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HalfEatenFry Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
lol youre welcome!
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Ayveena Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Hehe, I can't do origami. Beautiful picture indeed~
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:icon9atrigg:
9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
Aw, thank you~ :3
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AngelzSoul Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Student Writer
:O
I really love the image *o*.
Can I blog this on my tumblr (with credits): [link]
I loved it!
Bye :hug:
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
:D Sure you can, and thank you for the kind words! I really appreciate it~
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:iconangelzsoul:
AngelzSoul Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
So, here's the post: [link]
And you're welcome :).
Bye :hug:.
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
Your welcome! Eepz! I've never been on Tumblr before, so this is exciting~ Thank you!

Wait...aren't you the boy I was just speaking Portugeuse to? lol I would've said my thank you's on here instead of spamming your inbox orz...sorry~ ^^;
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AngelzSoul Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011  Student Writer
hahaha, yes I am haha. But I love this reception. I think that's nice :).
And you're not spamming hehe :)
See ya :hugua
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
Up until this point, I've never spoken another language to someone on here, lol. It's fun using Google translator though, so hopefully we'll talk more often, yes? :)
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AngelzSoul Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011  Student Writer
Yeah, "nůs podemos" (use google translator haha).
Well, I speak Portuguese, English and a little of Spanish. I really want to know how to speak French, German and Japanesse *--*.
I love to meet diferent cultures :D.
See ya :hug:
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
And I'm assuming you can figure this out yourself:

Yay! Coincidentemente, eu estava falando línguas que eu queria aprender, hoje e wer japonês e francês dois deles! Provavelmente um pouco de alemão também para que eu possa falar com meu irmão no Facebook e ninguém saberia o que estamos dizendo, lol~

I can understand the Spanish, I thought you were speaking Spanish at first, but then it said Portuguese and I was like ":? But he lives in Brazil, shouldn't he speak Spanish or...Brazilian?" xD And I love how I just tried to say what's up there, and I ended up failing mserably, lol
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Swiftstar10123 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011
PANDEE YOU'RE A NINJA.
THIS IS EPIC. CX
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011
THANK YOU SWIFTY.

I needed that comment. Badly. Seriously, thank you~
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Self-Epidemic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Those stars are so hard to make!
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011
Really? I don't think they are. They're addicting for me, lol. Making giant ones or really tiny ones...now those are hard!
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Self-Epidemic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I think there impossible, i wanted to make a little bottle for my bf, but i couldnt ;-;
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011
Hm...what part do you get stuck on?
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:iconself-epidemic:
Self-Epidemic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
The turning it into a star bit, you know the actual pinching bit, there it usually falls apart or looks dumb ;_;
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2011
That's always the hardest part. If you need to, I would suggest taping the little flap thing that tucks into the star, then pushing it in with your fingernails, or pencils or popsicle sticks if you're like me and bite your nails. :XD: Just don't use your thumbs, they end up looking weird, trust me.
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Self-Epidemic Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
okay! Thank you for the advice (:
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
Your welcome dear~ (:
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