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Oh Look, I Got A Free Crane by 9atrigg Oh Look, I Got A Free Crane by 9atrigg
IT'S DONE!!! 8D

I made 4 cranes. ...Turns out the first one was the better one, so I didn't have to do the others after all.

On the cereal box, it says:

Lucky Stars
Excellent Source of all vitamins!
Keep your days shining brightly!
Free Paper Crane Inside!

Yeah~ Took me all day. The star is their mascot whom does not have a name. xD

The milk carton is not mine, it is *kickass-peanut's.

This is for the project 1000 Deviants, 1000 Cranes. For more information, please go here: [link]

Hope you enjoy, I had a lot of fun doing this~!
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This is a cute idea :D There are a few points I'd like to bring up though:

- The paper you've made the crane out of is a bit hard to distinguish from the bowl of cereal stars. I think a solid color would have been a better choice.

- The wood grain background is a rather distracting to me ^^; The lines really don't flow with the composition at all. Look how crooked the spoon looks with all those lines behind it to see what I mean. But I think I see what you were going for though by putting the focal point of the composition at the point where all the lines converge. Maybe setting a tablecloth down, or a place-mat would help?

Hope this was helpful :) A few tweaks and you'll have a five star (haha) image :D
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Dragon-Clawshade Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Very cute. :meow:
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jinxchan6306 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
dream stars and a crane? nice!
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9atrigg Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
Aw, muchas gracias! :D
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ExcelsiorRedNose Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it!
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
Aw, thank you! ^^
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ExcelsiorRedNose Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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Swerd12 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That is awesome. After trying to make one star myself, I appreciate much more the hard work it must have took you, haha. Nice job, creative idea!!!!
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
Aww, thank you~! :D
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Swerd12 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!!! How long did it take you to make all of those???
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9atrigg Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
About 30 sec. to a minute to make each one, though the painted ones too much longer because I had to paint and dry so...I'm not really sure. ^^; I'm just gonna assume about three weeks to a month with school and distractions included in. It took me two weeks to construct the whole picture, I remember telling everyone in the household not to touch anything on the table because I was waiting for the correct lighting...I wanted viewers to actually feel the morning sunshine, ya know? xD
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