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IT'S DONE!!! 8D
I made 4 cranes. ...Turns out the first one was the better one, so I didn't have to do the others after all.
On the cereal box, it says:
Lucky Stars
Excellent Source of all vitamins!
Keep your days shining brightly!
Free Paper Crane Inside!
Yeah~ Took me all day. The star is their mascot whom does not have a name. xD
The milk carton is not mine, it is *kickass-peanut's.
This is for the project 1000 Deviants, 1000 Cranes. For more information, please go here: [link]
Hope you enjoy, I had a lot of fun doing this~!
I made 4 cranes. ...Turns out the first one was the better one, so I didn't have to do the others after all.
On the cereal box, it says:
Lucky Stars
Excellent Source of all vitamins!
Keep your days shining brightly!
Free Paper Crane Inside!
Yeah~ Took me all day. The star is their mascot whom does not have a name. xD
The milk carton is not mine, it is *kickass-peanut's.
This is for the project 1000 Deviants, 1000 Cranes. For more information, please go here: [link]
Hope you enjoy, I had a lot of fun doing this~!
Image size
400x400px 216.1 KB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-P200
Shutter Speed
1/8 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
11 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Mar 12, 2011, 12:13:24 PM
© 2011 - 2024 9atrigg
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Overall Vision Originality
Technique ImpactThis is a cute idea <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)"/> There are a few points I'd like to bring up though:- The paper you've made the crane out of is a bit hard to distinguish from the bowl of cereal stars. I think a solid color would have been a better choice.
- The wood grain background is a rather distracting to me <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="
" title="Sweating a little..."/> The lines really don't flow with the composition at all. Look how crooked the spoon looks with all those lines behind it to see what I mean. But I think I see what you were going for though by putting the focal point of the composition at the point where all the lines converge. Maybe setting a tablecloth down, or a place-mat would help?Hope this was helpful <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> A few tweaks and you'll have a five star (haha) image <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>